[oi-dev] Updated OpenIndiana-Welcome

[Till Wegmüller]

Hi Michael

I like it.
The only thing that could be improved is the Enterprise Class Features 
Section.

Compared to the other Sections it looks a little Bare bones.
Maybe one or two Sentences per Feature.
Or like Alexander Mentioned you could also use links to other Sites.


Greetings
Till

On 24.10.2016 04:54, Michael Kruger wrote:
> This is a request for comments for an updated OpenIndiana-Welcome doc...
>
> Did a quick update of the doc which ships with OI and is presented the
> first time Firefox is run.
>
> Please review and if you have suggestions for what else should be added
> to this, or would like to see something changed, please let me know.
>
> Feel free to turn on change tracking and send me back an edited copy.
>
> but please no bike-shedding.....as I would like to see this get shipped
> with the next release.
>
> ODT file is attached.
>
> thanks,
>
> Michael
>
>
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